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In truth (and I'm ready for the flaming) - its not your best work Dom
The font for the URL (second line down) is difficult to read.
Some of the wording is poor.
The use of capital letters is inconsistent and doesn't read easily...
Two question marks at the end of a sentence etc, etc.....
As a first draft its OK, but not a final version - IMHO
Tim