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Originally posted by domski
Quote: Originally posted by Rattler
In truth (and I'm ready for the flaming) - its not your best work Dom
The font for the URL (second line down) is difficult to read.
Some of the wording is poor.
The use of capital letters is inconsistent and doesn't read easily...
Two question marks at the end of a sentence etc, etc.....
As a first draft its OK, but not a final version - IMHO
Tim |
Cheeky fuc....
:P:P:P |
Oh - I thought you were looking for feedback!!!!
